Glorious Amateurs #5 - The V-1 Blitz

By Charlievon on Thu, 09/05/2024 - 22:07
Screenplay Type
TV Series
Genre
Historical Fiction
2024 Young Or Golden Writer
2024 Golden Screenwriter Award
Logline or Premise
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Glorious Amateurs #5 - The V1 Blitz.pdf

Comments

Stewart Carry Thu, 20/06/2024 - 15:31

Nothing wrong with the premise but the execution needs refining. The setting and ambience lack a plausible, wartime credibility, eg. Did doodlebugs buzz? Cut right back on lengthy descriptive paragraphs that slow down the pace.

Continent
Northern America