Joaquim e Call The submerged world

By Antônio Carreira on Mon, 26/05/2025 - 23:33
Screenplay Type
Animation
Genre
Fantasy
2025 Young Or Golden Writer
2025 Young Writer Award
Logline or Premise
In a world where portals open through emotion, Joaquim and Call — two brothers bound by fate — and their unpredictable ally must face a rising darkness, guided by Felitrix and the echo of an ancient guardian's prophecy, where only true love can hold the worlds together.
First 10 Pages - 3K Words Only

In a world where emotions unlock interdimensional portals, two brothers — the logical Joaquim and the impulsive Call — see their quiet lives transformed when their latent powers are awakened by a rising threat. Guided by Felitrix, a powerful and wise portal mage who knows the truth about their past, they learn that their bond is the key to something far greater than magic: a force capable of reshaping worlds.

As Omatrix, a warlord from a corrupted realm, begins to conquer universe after universe, Felitrix reveals the history of an ancient war, and why Joaquim, Call, and their friend JimmyJosh were destined to be part of this fight. But strength alone isn’t enough — it’s their courage, loyalty, and above all, the love they share that will determine the fate of all realities.

Blending fantasy, science fiction and emotional depth, Joaquim and Call is a story of awakening, legacy, and the healing power of love — the one force strong enough to stand against the darkness and restore hope across worlds.

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Comments

Stewart Carry Wed, 04/06/2025 - 11:44

Since this is animation, I'm not sure it really fits easily into the available categories for judging. It's a very niche genre that would obviously appeal to young adults/teens into computer games etc but feels quite out of place here. Good luck with it anyway.

Melissa Hope Thu, 07/08/2025 - 05:15

This is incredible work for someone who is only 14! Well done, Antonio. Some dialogue sounds forced; try reading it out loud or have someone else read it out loud to you. Character introductions should say less about what they look like and more about their personality and context. This source can help: https://www.studiobinder.com/blog/screenplay-character-descriptions-introductions/ .

Also, since JimmyJosh is a single humanoid, write them in as one character. Ex. JimmyJosh instead of Jimmy and Josh. If you give Jimmy and Josh very different methods of speaking, (ex. one could speak in slang while the other is proper), the reader/viewer should be able to tell the difference, kind of like if someone had Schizophrenia.

I hope this is helpful. I wish you all the best!

Continent
Latin America and the Caribbean