INT. - SANTA MONICA, CA - APARTMENT – DAY
Tasteful living room in beautiful flow of color, as well as black and white photographs of Italy and New York. Sepia tone Photographs of Native American people and land hang in a corner of the space.
EMMA COLBERT (32) is an attractive, tall strawberry blonde with big black glasses sits on the oversized sofa with a laptop looking frustrated. Her tuxedo cat is laying half on her lap and half on the keyboard.
MARTHA (30), Hispanic, petite and attractive steps out of her bedroom and walks toward the open Tuscan orange kitchen. She walks back out with two mugs of coffee and hands EMMA a mug.
They both look out the window as sunrise color falls on the tall palm trees.
EMMA
Thanks. Well, I don’t see one
production job to apply for and
not one damn response from all the
resumes I sent out for film work.
MARTHA shakes her head and starts to walk back to her bedroom.
MARTHA
It’s a business of sadists and
masochists.
EMMA
Damn right and how am I supposed to
do good for the world if I can’t
get a fucking break? Back to catering.
EXT. BUSY LA CAFÉ WITH A DIVERSE GROUP
Emma sits with her friend KATIE (30) curvy and pretty Irish looks. They sit at a small table.
KATIE
I will certainly keep an ear open for
you. I was on unemployment for several
months before I got the gig at Disney.
EMMA
Yep, that’s the deal for pretty much
everyone in this biz. I so hope you’ll
be happy at Disney. Great benefits I’m really happy for you, Katie Lou. I’ll
be working a catering party tonight.
KATIE
(putting down her sandwich)
You’re right, this is one of the best sandwiches ever. All organic, too. Wow. Yep, so much talent in this town and
too many left in the cold.
EMMA
I’m feeling left out in the cold at
the moment. Martha said that it’s
a business of sadists and masochists.
I should add singles, sadists, and masochists. LA, the city of wannabes.
INT. CATERING EVENT – NIGHT
Event is in a large, tented area in a grass area at the back of the house on a bluff overlooking the ocean Lanterns hang from above and tall orchids are on the tables. People are milling about in and outside the tent. Bar is set up inside the tent.
Emma is bartending and people are waiting five deep for drinks. She waves at a co-worker tray passing.
Emma is shown in the catering kitchen area eating with her co-workers. They’re conversing and laughing with her
CO-WORKER ONE
I had to hide from a guest who I just
auditioned for. It would’ve been un-
bearable if she’d recognized me.
EMMA
I swear, in my black and white uniform,
I feel as if I’m LA invisible. No one
recognizes me from former production jobs. Invisible to my dreams and in-
visible to eligible men my age.
CO-WORKER TWO
Oh, please, EMMA. You are gorgeous
and just-so-you-know, you never notice men noticing you.
EMMA
(incredulous)
I don’t?
CHRISTOPHER REINHARDT is tall, lanky with dark brown copper wavy hair. He is in court as an environmental attorney. Christopher’s assistant and intern CHARLIE (22), a black young man sits behind Christopher in court attentively listening.
CHRISTOPHER
(Speaking with passionate authority in final argument)
Your honor, the CEO and all the branches of
this corporation have knowingly been dumping
pollutants in lakes and rivers across the Midwest for
The evidence is clear. It’s only their deep pockets that have kept them from paying the price. They are detrimental to carry on in dirty ways as if they are above the law and nothing touches them. Strict restrictions are
not even satisfactory. It’s outrageous and this is only one
part of the price they must pay! Enough of their
cavalier attitude. I suggest a billion paid to the counties
that have suffered for their clean-up and another 500 million have for clean air and water. Putting strict
Camera is on Christopher as judge hits the gavel and states that there will be sentencing in two days. Court adjourned. Charlie looks on with skepticism.
RANDOLPH WHITEHEAD is in the back of the courtroom, an impeccably dressed man in a dark suit and white shirt. He’s a wealthy looking man about 50 years of age, silver hair observing Christopher’s closing argument. `
INT. WINE BAR – NIGHT
EMMA dressed in a black, sleek, simple and elegant dress with her hair done nicely and flattering makeup
EMMA
Ok, now that you’ve told me about your
divorce, struggle financially due to
alimony and child support, what else? Do you have interests – travel, exercise,
passions, causes?
DATE
Sure, football, soccer. Work exhausts
me, so I’m more of a staycation type.
I’m big on chill. Causes? Not really.
I donate to a few.
EMMA
(takes a big sip of wine
looking bored but trying)
I’m terribly concerned about climate
crisis. We are in bad shape, and worse,
is extinction of animals. Climate
deniers who are mostly conservatives
and set us back for decade.s
DATE
Can’t say that I agree. I’m a conservative and prefer the policies.
The over top concern for the planet is
a bunch of leftist alarmists making trouble.
EMMA
You know what, I need to go. My cat
needs a walk. One tip per your profile,
So what if you’re bald. Own it and make that the profile rather than the old
one you have on the dating site.
EMMA stands nearly knocking over her chair as customers look on.
DATE has his mouth open from the direct blow of Emma while he touches his bald head searching for hair.
EXT. PARKING LOT -_NIGHT
EMMA
(talking to herself)
Frozen yogurt it is.
INT. MESSY OFFICE – DAY
Christopher sits with his tie undone, white shirt, and hair unruly and is bent over a stack of papers and folders on the floor. Desk is overflowing with devices and files.
CHARLIE
Mr. Reinhardt, I uh -
CHRISTOPHER
(interrupts Charlie)
Charlie, please call me Christopher.
I’m not that much older than you. (Christopher shows a smirk)
CHARLIE
Ok, well, I have distressing news.
(as he hesitates)
CHRISTOPHER
For the love of God, spit it out.
CHARLIE
(takes a deep breath)
They’ve switched judges. Classic
switch and bait. And worse, it’s
Johnson. I just received the email –
CHRISTOPHER stares out the window silent, which throws Charlie for a loop. Suddenly he swipes all the papers on the desk along with a Harvard mug.
CHRISTOPHER
(screams)
Son of a bitch. It’s over – Three
years of work and a case I could’ve
actually won. They bought the court –
Those billionaire bastards – biggest
polluter globally bought the fucking court! This was to be my swan song.
Charlie has no idea what to do. He moves to pick up the mug and files.
CHRISTOPHER
Don’t bother, Charlie. It’s ok.
Sorry.
CHARLIE
You’re right. This is SO fucked up.
I wish there was something I could
do. Now, more than ever, I see how there’s no other way.
CHRISTOPHER
(staring out the window)
Yep, sorry buddy. I know you studied
hard and entered this world to stick
it to the bad guys, but I’ve been at
this for 10-years and corporations
have the power 80% of the time.
INT. – CHRISTOPHER’S APARTMENT – NIGHT
Christopher watches the Seattle Skyline. Scotch in hand. His cat Pirate on his lap. Sustainable and stylish environmentally friendly furniture. Tribal décor.
INT. EMMA’s BEDROOM PAINTED IN OCEAN BLUE – MID-MORNING
Emma is wrapped in sea blue walls with golden accents and black and white photos on the wall.
Emma is looking defeated under a cream-colored duvet and staring at the ceiling while her cat is sleeping on her stomach. There’s a knock at her door.
EMMA
Come on in, Martha.
Martha’s in her pj’s and comes into Emma’s bedroom.
MARTHA
What happened? Heard you come back
in pretty early and go straight to
your bedroom. I take it that the
Bumble date was not so good.
EMMA
Disaster. A hard-core conservative.
Shall I go further?
MARTHA’s eyebrows raise as she shakes her head.
MARTHA
Oh my God. Jesus. How I wish I could’ve been a spectator.
EMMA
I don’t know why I bother. It’s always like this although this guy took the cake. Everyone says, be open. I’ve had more disastrous dates in this town than imaginable. It’s so demoralizing.
MARTHA
It’s true that you are picky. But why
shouldn’t you be. You have tons of integrity, beauty, and smarts, Em. I
But you’re also a dreamer and a romantic fantasizing about someone out of a
romance novel.
EMMA
Ha, romance novel. I can’t even attract
above average, let alone, normal and a
progressive liberal. It’s LA not Texas.
MARTHA
Coffee?
EMMA
Let’s go out. I want a cornetto and a macchiato. I need to feel like I’m
back in Italy – back where I feel most
at home. This country is broken.
MARTHA
Ah, yes. Italy. What you really want
is all the qualities you desire, but
in a handsome Italian guy. Ok. Get dressed. Put your hair back in a ponytail. We single LA girls are
going out.
EMMA
You know where we’re going, right?
MARTHA
I know that Renato is there.
EMMA
True, my fav but they have ceramic
cups don’t forget so we won’t waste plastic or paper.
EXT – SEATTLE WATERSIDE BOATYARD – SAME MORNING
Christopher is jogging with earbuds. He stops where there is a large boat and begins talking to three people including RON (mid=40’s years of and looks like a seafaring salty dog), Christopher’s legal assistant, Charlie and RITA (35 yr-old red head and rugged outdoors athletic woman)
CHRISTOPHER
I know it’s frustrating to wait so
long for this eco-voyage to begin Remember, to be discrete. We can’t
chance any screw-ups. Be patient,
everything has to be in place or it
The money is nearly raised for our first mission. Be sure of this, guys (smiles) and Rita, you must cut ties with
everyone for a long while.
They all walk in different directions and Christopher puts his earplugs back in and continues jogging to a coffee shop.
COZY SEATTLE COFFEE SHOP – SAME MORNING
Christopher walks into the coffee shop looking like a regular as he knows the name of the barista, he orders an espresso from. Three young attractive women sit at a table all smiling and talking about Christopher hoping he’ll turn their way. He picks up a newspaper not noticing the women and sits outside with his espresso in a glass espresso container.
Christopher looks up as a new model Mercedes pulls up and a well-dressed man gets out of the back as Christopher looks up from his newspaper. He comes out with an iced coffee drink in a large plastic cup. He’s talking on his cell about the big deal about to close and how they have no idea what’s coming. He adds sugar to the iced drink and throws the empty packet on the curb as his driver opens the door for him.
Christopher downs his espresso, grabs his newspaper and starts walking quickly down the street.
EXT. PATIO OF A SMALL, QUAINT ITALIAN CAFÉ – SAME MORNING
Emma, Martha, and Katie are seated at a table. Small vases of roses are on each table.
EMMA
Stop. Renato is charming and good
looking but he’s a friend. One small detail – He’s married with kids. I
asked him if he had a brother.
RENATO (38), tall, good-looking with a big smile on his face comes to the table.
RENATO
Buongiorno, bellas. Emma, come stai?
(looking at Emma) Bellisima, si?
He looks to her friends for them to agree and they all smile shaking their heads, yes.
RENATO
Three cappuccinos and three cornettos.
Bene, subito.
Katie and Martha are smiling and looking at Emma.
EMMA
What? Harmless flirting. I need to
get it anyway I can, right? God knows,
it wasn’t with the Fascist last night.
KATIE
WHAT? That must’ve been interesting.
Do tell.
EMMA
Ultra-right conservative. False
photos and profile text. So uncreative.
No integrity. Where are the Gregory
Pecks of the world? A guy you can
count on, who fucking cares. Charm
wouldn’t hurt and someone who’s
adventurous.
EMMA
Looking at her phone. Shit, I’m
going to be late for RescueCats.
There are so many kittens right now
every time I’m there, I’m horrified
over and over at the capacity of
human cruelty. I just cuddle on the
young mommy cats and their kittens.
What’s amazing, is that they can
still trust humans.
KATIE
They are lucky to have you.
MARTHA
If our landlord allowed it, our
apartment would be overflowing with
cats. By the way, don’t forget the
big protest we have tomorrow.
KATIE
Damn, I’d be there if I could, but
we shoot tomorrow.
EMMA
There’s no way I’d forget. We’ll miss
you Katie. I’m part of that prop to
clean up our oceans. We’re up against
oil companies. Corporations have the power because greed wins.
MARTHA
Hey, we’re doing a good thing.
EMMA
Indeed.
Emma stands to leave, and she hugs them both.
EMMA
Ciao bellas.
EXT – STREET - NIGHT
Beautiful tree-lined street with mansions overlooking the bay. We see the same Mercedes and driver. He’s loading a suitcase in the trunk as the same man walks out of mansion talking on his cell. He slips in the back seat.
A slim, tall figure in all black with a Robin Hood type
mask on walks cat-like on the street.
EXT. OUTDOOR PATIO PARTY – NIGHT
Emma is chatting with JACK (36) 5’9” good looking, dressed LA stylish drinking a glass of red.
JACK
Ah, Emma, Leslie wanted the two of
us to meet at this party. How’s it
going? Great LA night for a party.
Emma is casual in a feminine taupe top with sliming jeans and bronze espadrilles.
EMMA
(smiling, looking pleased)
Nice to meet you. Yes, and there’s a
full moon with a perfect temp. Leslie
is quite the hopeful matchmaker. I understand you are working in the biz.
Me too – well when I can get work -
JACK
I get it. It’s not a business for
those who lack courage. I’m sure
you know it takes bold steps. (Pause)
JACK
Moonlight does great things to your
beauty. He gives her a side glance.
EMMA
(smiling)
Wow, aren’t you charming. (She smiles
and catches herself feeling a bit shy
and obviously attracted to him).
EMMA
(gains composure)
So, what are you interested in doing
in the film biz? Are you gainfully employed in unreliable Hollywood?
JACK
Yeah, mostly producing commercials
but want to move into producing big
films. Commercials pay great money
but it’s LA. Time to make a Hollywood
film. What about you?
EMMA
(taken aback)
Um, well, I want to be a creative
producer and make films that are
of course, entertaining but have an important message. Movies have the greatest capacity to influence for
good. This world is in peril–right?
Comments
Not sure what the premise is…
Not sure what the premise is at all. To be honest, every aspect of the script needs a thorough rethink: the characters, the dialogue, the storyline, the language, the pacing and overall structure. Is this w first draft?