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Glorious Amateurs #5 - The V-1 Blitz
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Glorious Amateurs - The V-1 Blitz
This is the fifth episode of a seven part limited TV series.
Nothing wrong with the…
Nothing wrong with the premise but the execution needs refining. The setting and ambience lack a plausible, wartime credibility, eg. Did doodlebugs buzz? Cut right back on lengthy descriptive paragraphs that slow down the pace.