EXT. DARK FOREST – EARLY MORNING
A tall creature physically appears to change into a human being.
NARRATOR.
A lost mythology buried within the tides of time has recently come to light and research has shown that children of the Myolithic period had protectors during times of war. They took on the form of tiny mortal-like creatures with wings as fine as gossamer thread. They were called CYRENUS NAFAERES, meaning ‘Fairy’s.’But only for children, never to be seen by adults.
CROSSFADE TO:
NEW ANGLE - swoops back to creature changing to a human male, the last of its hairs fading away as a ferocious wind swirls his cloak about his body revealing hooves to feet.
KARDONITH holds up his hands to a darkening sky.
KARDONITH
Tonight my Lord let me have her
to take the vengeance so rightfully
mine. Keep the Sorceress in her
castle.
Catches a reflection of himself, pulls a face then sees his army behind him in particular two small goblins as they rub their hands together with seeming glee.
KARDONITH (shouts)
Remember no elves must be left alive.
I will regain my lost kingdom.
Touches sword, open and closes hands. A dragon waits nearby as he climbs aboard and holds his hands aloft.
KARDONITH
Onwards dragon to the Lady Sorceress.
There will be no Fairy Kingdom if I,
Slayer of Darduce, has a say in it.
A bright light appears in the sky and he holds up his hands to protect his eyes as his mouth falls open in horror.
FADE UP TO REVEAL
EXT – BRIGHT LIGHT – STAGE RT
KARDONITH
Come dragon we must fly and search.
MOVING SHOT - swoops looking around fields and forests. Pan into a lit clearing which reveals an imprint. Kardonith’s face dark and worried looking at indentation. A tall, imposing figure walks into a bright light. Kardonith falls to his knees and bows.
OMEGERINE
You fool Kardonith. I give you reign
to use the sorceress – too late, she
has produced the child, but NOT yours!
NARRATOR.
Two beings were forged from the very fabric of the earth – The Alpherine and The Omegerine: The POWERS who maintain a balance between ecstasy and agony, to create harmony and stability so that man could exist. The Alpherine produced Angels and Unicorns. The Omegerine, the Evil Slayer of Darduce, trolls and goblins. But without goodness, evil would endure and so the Alpherine needed to create something pure – maybe a being who would not be corrupted, sweet, gentle, perfect in every way so humans could see it, touch it, reap from it. She was needed to fulfil the prophecy laid down in the annals of the 1st world, where a beauty would change the world. Breathtaking in their beauty, ethereal and enchanting, the Fairy Kingdom has captured the imagination of people throughout the world……….This is their attempt to first create their own world between themselves.
Pan down to Kardonith in front of the Omegerine.
KARDONITH
Master, I beg of you to give me more
time. I will get the child and destroy it
before the ‘Fairy Dynasty’ begins.
OMEGERINE
(sighs)Very well, but do not fail me
this time. This is your one last chance.
Pan to Dragon as Omegerine disappears – MOVING SHOT – Kardonith climbs on, flies away
INT – LUSH BEDROOM. CASTLE IN FOREST.
A beautiful woman languishes on a huge bed and holds out her hands. She sings gently as she moulds herself around him. My dearest love, my soul sings as I see you here!
SORCERESS
My love, what a pleasant surprise.
Know your child has been born
and I have sent it as you instructed.
Kardonith turns to her with his eyes full of hatred, his skin slowly turning back to fur, his hands opening and closing with anger. BEAT:
KARDONITH
You see my dear, I am not who you
think I am and already know of your
unfaithfulness with the Alpherine
and how I was humiliated before
my Lord the Omegerine.
She stands up, then his hands move quickly to her neck as she starts to step away from him. His hands tightening around her throat and as she begins to collapse beneath him
KARDONITH
Now you must die and know that I
Kardonith will ensure your child
will never live a long life. The
pathetic little Fairy’s will never,
ever, gain their Kingdom and she
will NOT be Queen of the Fairy’s.
PAN TO WOMAN LYING DOWN. Opens her hand, throws a ball of light out of the castle window as she chokes.
SORCERESS
Never will you attain your desires
for I curse you forever, never to
break my curse!
She dies – he walks away as the sky darkens. PAN TO:
EXT – DARK SKY – LIGHT TRAILS IN SKY
PAN over to a lit forest clearing – a man and woman gather wood – woman points to sky.
MARILDA
Looks like a few star-lights have
fallen over yonder Thaddeus.
THADDEUS
Knowing our luck, they’ve probably
landed near us. We can go look if you
wish?
MARILDA
No don’t worry we need wood for
our wood store...
She hesitates – sky suddenly lights up
MARILDA
Thaddeus that was so close.
THADDEUS
You’re right dear but I prefer
to ignore it.
MARILDA
No we must go are you coming?
Thaddeus throws down his axe – picks it up again as if ready for battle. Walks through forest, when bright light appears, he falls to his knees, shields his eyes
CUT TO:
Marilda stands transfixed by lights.
THADDEUS
Marilda are you alright? What
is happening?
PAN TO: Marilda walks towards him holding a baby. As she looks at her she sings, gently smiling, tenderly stroking her tiny face. Ends song looking happily at Thaddeus.
MARILDA(excited) BEAT:
Look Thaddeus what the Gods have given
us – Our prayers have been answered,
we have been sent a child. Not of this
world but she is to become a great
Fairy Queen and start the first Fairy
Dynasty. She must be treated as our
own child until the time comes.
PAN TO:
Thaddeus opens and closes mouth – gathers them to him. They move away leaving a faint footprint.
EXT – EARLY MORNING - COTTAGE WINDOW
Two ugly Goblins lean on window ledge peering in as black bearded man peers out. URUK, pointed blackened teeth glistening with saliva dripping from his thick red lips. Tufts of orange hair stuck out from top of his boil covered face. He looks at his equally ugly twin brother.
ERIDU
Brother I can already taste this sweet
child we can devour her in one mouthful.
URUK(hopping madly)
Let me see, me see I must.
ERIDU
This girl is mine and when we find
the boy he is all yours brother.
URUK
Oh you are so clever brother but
did the Master say take them back maybe?
ERIDU (stamping foot)
So the master will get these infernal
brats then we eat them.
They laugh rubbing hands together, try to climb in slightly open window. It bangs shut, both panic then laugh, Uruk falls on floor with shock.
ERIDU
Good job we are invisible to
humans. That must be father of
the baby.
URUK
We must not go home empty handed
or master will kill us – we need
a good story, true or not!
ERIDU(SLAPS URUK ARM)
Stupid idiot. The master comes from
one of two supreme beings, ’The Powers’
Remember them? His evil is infinite.
He will not be fooled.
URUK (sad)
What now..? But, I will eat that man
one day. (looking at the father)
ERIDU
Rubbish we’ve lost our chance so
now we go for the boy.
CUT TO:
Walking along singing, Uruk is quite happy and discussing ways of trapping the boy as he is already walking and talking as he strolls along kicking up his legs.
EXT – DAYLIGHT - LARGE ELEGANT CASTLE ON HILL
Uruk sits down after climbing the high hill.
ERIDU
What are you doing you lump
of fat?
Uruk stands up quickly and falls down again. Eridu still cross with him.
URUK
Why, thinking like you.
ERIDU(cuffs his head)
You’ll never think like me, any-
way I’ve had a thought.
URUK(rubs hands together)
I loves it when you has a thought.
They are always so..so evil.
ERIDU(whispering)
Remember the last child we took? (Pause)
Well we need to find the entrance
like before.
EXT – CASTLE – WALL IN FRONT OF THEM
They arrive at the castle walls and pat around the walls, smile at each other and climb through a hole.
PAN TO:
EXT – VERY LARGE GARDEN LAWN – CHILDREN PLAYING
URUK(smiles)
Oh more children here than we can
eat. So let’s take a couple to eat
now, then take boy to Master.
ERIDU(disgust)
You are the most stupid of the
entire Masters stupid idiot Goblins.
Why am I cursed with this idiot for a
brother? We need to take the boy now,
no time to eat - PIG.
All hell will break loose once the
boy disappears.(Leans into Uruk’s ear)
and when that happens I don’t want
to be here. MOVING SHOT
Uruk hangs his head, but sees a little boy running so fast he falls over. A beautiful female picks him up laughing.
LADY ALALIAH(mother)
Oh my little Hippo you are rushing
things as usual.
Little boy touches mothers face and they rub noses. Uruk stands and Eridu grabs his neck.
ERIDU
We must watch and wait.
Uruk sits panting tongue out, sweating profusely.
URUK
Can I have a drink, so desperate?
He looks around, sees water, shuffles quietly over and puts hand in to drink. Weird looking child jumps up and down pointing to Uruk. Eridu looks across to see Uruk visible and a tall bearded man walk over about to grab Uruk’s neck.
ERIDU
Hand in water, makes you
visible fool.
Removes hand but too late. Tries to run away but a crook stick pulls him back and grabs his large ears.
EBUSUS
I am Ebusus Wizard of the Sands
and Sea, get your brother here
now and both become visible.
Withershins here recognised you!
Eridu and Uruk visualise.
EBUSUS
I know who sent you so tell
your master we have matters to
attend very soon.
Eridu ignores Uruk on journey home. BEAT:
URUK
But brother I was so thirsty
and I cannot think straight,
but Uruk feels much sorrow.
Please speak to me. You
have a cold heart of granite
I think.
Eridu stops, Uruk cannons into him.
ERIDU
Forgiving the master is not.
Apology goes to him but I don’t
want to be in your shoes. That
I don’t.
URUK(hangs head)
I wonder if I’ll be alive tomorrow?
CUT TO:
EXT – FOREST CLEARING – HORSE STOPS – YEARS LATER
Girl flies over horse’s head straight into a handsome slightly older male who lies on floor under her. Turning she looks straight into his beautiful brown eyes, long black dishevelled hair.
FAYLINN
Oh my I am so sorry it was an
accident. Please forgive me.
HIPPONIAN(struggling to stand up)
What do you think you are doing?
Try learning to ride a horse
before galloping.(sarcastic voice) BEAT:
FAYLINN
I don’t know who you are sir
but I’ve been riding since I was
born and it was a pure accident.
Besides you just got in my way.
HIPPONIAN(voice dark)
So you must be Faylinn?
Faylinn stands up brushing herself off. Long blonde hair cascading with bright green eyes sparkling as she looks up at him in surprise.
HIPPONIAN(cont)
Galloping like that is dangerous
and I had to put myself in your way
to avoid you dying!
FAYLINN
You stand there like a tall God,
arrogant, judging me, who do you
think you are may I ask?
HIPPONIAN
Your parents should have put you
over their knees when you were
younger.
FAYLINN
By the sound of your voice I
imagine you would delight in
delivering the punishment.
HIPPONIAN(smiles cheekily)
You are so right, it sounds
delightful, but we must declare a
truce for now.
CUT TO:
Two riders ride over and both jump off their horses.
Comments
I am a huge fan of fantasy…
I am a huge fan of fantasy tropes, and this one is pretty good. Do try to finish your manuscript, and be sure to get a good screenwriting software, like Fade In, which is the one I use, and it's free.
Formatting this correctly…
Formatting this correctly would be a positive step in the right direction but it needs a great deal more to hook the reader in. The premise feels tired and worn out, begging the question: 'What's different about this fairy-inspired fantasy?'